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Fire of Chaos Chapter 8

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Published: Jan 12, 2014

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Okay, I am done! Wow, Um… Eighteen pages… Unbelievable… Once again, it wouldn't let me publish it simple... I had to resort to PDF again... Ugh, annoying... Apparently, it doesn't allow more than 64 something…

Sorry to put you through this.

But I am done, anyway! And just in time, too. Finally I am back to school! YES!! I know it’s weird that I’m so happy about that, but… Trust me–I’m more than glad to be away from my family, even if I have to bust my butt with school for real this time. I’m thankful that I got another chance…

Anyway. What happened here? A lot of things, yeah! I… I can’t even describe them all! Danger in Equestria is once again setting in, and… Everyone’s wrapping their heads around that fact; a dragon invasion that may overtake Equestria as it took the Southern Kingdom. Luna’s powers are still unavailable, but… Thankfully, she refuses to give up. That’s our Luna right there. She definitely had to go after Modest when she saw the chance.

To her surprise, she found him, and Princess Talia, too. They were free! They worked pretty hard to free themselves, but she’s not exactly quite stoked about the teamwork the two made… Luna’s jealous! Isn’t that adorable!

I loved the exchange between Miseria and Pyro! It was awesome… And, yeah, Miseria got captured… Oh, dear, me… Looks like things will be serious, in case you hadn’t gotten the point… I had a lot of fun as usual, especially with that concept of Miseria’s voice–that banshee-like screech! Ooh, I can just imagine that piercing everyone’s ears… I kept imagining that golden egg from the fourth book/movie of Harry Potter. Only louder and more… Um, gigantic reptile roar-screech like.

There was a lot of action in this chapter, but… Maybe the characters came off a bit weak. Or maybe I’ve just had quite enough of break and it’s starting to mess with my zone and my place in this story, oh, boy…

Like, the things in the Southern Kingdom. I was like, ‘what the heck am I doing here now?’ So, don’t be surprised if the chapter does seem like… it was thrown around and I didn’t know what to do. So many stuff were happening around me, I really did not know what I was doing sometimes… Sorry.

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